One thing I have found about trying a daily prompt: I pretty much have to go with what comes out of my mind, even if that hadn’t been my plan on starting. Miz Q has given us three word lists, from which we are to use one, two, and three words in a poem about place (then save the words because there will be more).
I forgot the place part, happily chose my six words and whipped them into a short poem of sorts. Then the part of the brain that lies in wait for this sort of thing, said: Place? I kept the six words I had chosen, originally — that was my challenge to myself. The poem is metaphorical because that was the only way I could work place in.
When You’re Not in Kansas Anymore
When life is no longer a sprint
to the finish line. When you
look down your lane — marked
with its measured white —
and the tape is fuzzed. When
the track’s surface is no longer
smooth, you have a choice.
You can limp, or crawl, your way
to the end, or you can flatten death
with respect and a sledgehammer.
Misky
06/06/2015 at 10:29 am
Yes, a sledgehammer. That’s what I need; knock myself into shape. I’ll borrow yours, if you don’t mind. xx
margo roby
06/06/2015 at 10:40 am
You may have it.
Misky
06/06/2015 at 11:04 am
I decided to rewrite using six of the words…
margo roby
06/06/2015 at 11:05 am
Gnawing at you was it?
margo roby
06/06/2015 at 11:09 am
You are posting it or you have only made the decision and would I please back off?
Misky
06/06/2015 at 11:09 am
(moaning…..)
margo roby
06/06/2015 at 11:15 am
… and drifting. The two are compulsory. Chains and a candle optional.
Misky
06/06/2015 at 11:17 am
How very Dickensian.
margo roby
06/06/2015 at 11:19 am
We try our best.
barbcrary
06/06/2015 at 11:27 am
Sledgehammers are not the appropriate remedy for fuzzy. Just saying.
margo roby
06/06/2015 at 11:35 am
Yeh, but if you want to keep that fuzziness at bay… Whap!
Misky
06/06/2015 at 1:18 pm
I’m kinda pouty that I’ve been tagged with this fuzzy name. (pout)
barbcrary
06/06/2015 at 1:24 pm
You’ve been tagged? I thought it was self-referential. Fuzzy is cuddly and nice. Like a duckling in a pond. Or something
margo roby
07/06/2015 at 9:37 am
No, no. You’re (snort). b is fuzzy.
Misky
07/06/2015 at 6:34 pm
Okay. I can cope with snort.
barbcrary
06/06/2015 at 11:28 am
Also, Margo, serendipity and synergy and all those fine “s” words in addition to sledgehammer. I like where you went with this. 🙂
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
06/06/2015 at 11:46 am
Oh Margo, those last two lines….I couldn’t even lift a sledgehammer!
margo roby
06/06/2015 at 11:50 am
Oh, ViV, that made me laugh. How about a metaphorical sledgehammer? (yes, I am bad)
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
06/06/2015 at 12:06 pm
You know my squabbles with metaphor: I couldn’t even lift a metaphorical sledgehammer!
whimsygizmo
06/06/2015 at 12:45 pm
NICE. Love the whomp of that sledgehammer.
Your explanation of the prompt has me thinking I misunderstood how many words to use (I used one from each group.) Oh, well. Ya’ll know by now, I DON’T do numbers. 😉
julespaige
06/06/2015 at 12:52 pm
Got retirement on the brain do we?
o.O oops I misread the instructions…
I only sort of followed Q partly and added a twist so it isn’t a ‘sad day’ after all:
https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/06/06/forest-floored-6-6-s/
Hannah Gosselin
06/06/2015 at 4:47 pm
Oh my goodness!! Your closing caused a great laugh and a big hooray!! That’s the way! 🙂
Candy
06/06/2015 at 7:03 pm
A sledgehammer- how marvelous
Vagrant Rhodia
07/06/2015 at 7:06 am
Thanks for the reminder for me to fix my own as well 😀 Love your place poem Part II